I really like it so far, but I can't help but think that going to the third sister so abruptly could have been better done. Like, something in the page just before that could have hinted there was a third, like "Wasn't there another sister?" or something like that. The sudden jump was a little disorienting.
Always exciting to see art from you; even more exciting to see comics. You've set up a captivating scenario thus far, can't wait to know how it unfolds.
I noticed that it was much brighter at the first pages compared to now- that might just be me!
Interesting relation ship here eheheheh....
Other than that, I loved it